YISS 2007 . CLASS 1E1

Sunday, September 23, 2007

HEELLLOOOO.
Tomorrow school already. hahaha, done your homework, did your revision liao mah? XD
Anyway, here are the answers for Editing Exercise worksheet 2.

1. We tried to compete who could build the biggest sandcastle but the sand was sloppy and it was hard to make even a small one.
We tried to compete to see who could build the biggest sandcastle. Unfortunately the sand was very soft and it was very hard to make even a small one.

2. It became too difficult to play in the water and we were afraid the ball would get thrown out further into the sea so went back to the shore and play.
It became very difficult to play in the water as we were afraid that the ball would accidentally get thrown further out to the sea. To be safe, we decided to go back to the shore to continue our game.

3. After our two weeks in Melbourne had passed, we came back to Singapore missing our sweet homes.
After two weeks in Melbourne, we came back to Singapore, our home. It was only when we got back that we realized how much we had missed our home.

4. I have been to Japen before and I really do enjoy the Disneyland down there, the Disneyland is really very fun!
I have never been to Japan before. I was very excited about the Disneyland as I have heard that Disneyland is really very fun. When I got there, whatever has been said about Disneyland was really true. I really enjoyed myself.

5. One of the fun activity is the earthquake, the earthquake was where you will stand on a flat ground, where the ground will shake tremendously, and you must try your best to stand on your grip.
One of the fun activities was the earthquake. For the earthquake game, one will be standing on flat ground. Suddenly the ground will shake tremendously and one must try their best to stand firm to the ground and not fall.

6. I were very thirsty so I went to buy some drink and some candies and went back to play some activities.
I was very thirsty so I went to buy and drinks and candies. After that, I went back to continue with the rest of the activities.

7. After I return, they have already queue to right up the front already.
When I got back to the queue, my friends are already right in front. I was very sad.

8. If there was another chance to go again, I would definetly would want to go to the Disneyland again, as I am sure that there will be many many more interesting activities how compare to the last visit I went.
If I had another chance to go to Japan again, I will definitely go to the Disneyland again. This is because I am very sure that there will be many more other interesting activities compared to this visit.

Another bunch of wrong again I think. lol.
Well, cya'll tomorrow. :D
First exam, English paper on 28th Sept.
GOOD LUCK!
tip: learn your ABCs.
lol XD lame.

toodles.

posted by tere .s